Very good.
For a first flash this is one of the best ive seen, compared to most of the CRAPPY first flash stuff people have submitted here.
The animation was smooth and close to life like.
However near the end I did notice that some of the movement was repeated, but then the song ended so it didnt really matter.
So well done you have great skill, make more, and have fun.
- Jon.
you have great potential
if this is truly your first flash, you have the gift. the graphics were superb and the girl had very lifelike movements, although half of the flash was just repeated movie clips and such. but i beg you, reconsider your style, happy jappy singing is funny in its own way but this wasnt supposed to be funny, i can tell. you would be perfect for something action packed. if violence isnt your cup of tea make something for the kids, but this was just boring. a girl dancing gets old very fast (unless she's nekkid...idea for a new movie xP?) anyway i really hope to see more from you, i see great things if you can tweak your style to meet newgrounds' audience
thank you very much, all comments are more than welcome, BTw i don´t have any problems with violence and or sexual stuff
or with things that are created for the kids, so yes i´d love to create something action packed maybe that could be another project :D
see ya!!!
First flash? Wow!
_Good Points_
For your first flash this was extremely good. The synching of animation to the music was also very good and as for the fbf, you seem to have mastered the basics. The song seemed to have fitted the animation (even though I hated the song - but that's just my taste of music don't worry about it. And I'm not bringing down the mark on music because of that.)
_Bad Points_
Sorry to say but I didn't like the character too much, the colours were pretty horrible. You used the same movie clip over and over which made it repetative and slightly boring to watch (even though the movie clip you made was really good.) Could have added more detail in general really.
_Overall_
For your first animation it was fantastic! I'd love to see you make a animated story I think you could pull that off fantastically as you do have a lot of talent. Nice one.
~LazyFeet
thank you for your great advise buddy!!! this is the kind of things that help you to improve, i had some problems chosing the colors i thought they were ok, but i guess i should be more carefull next time,and many dudes have complained about the cycles repeated. so i´ll try to not do this again. thanks for your advice!!!!
good
That had some nice animation, alot of effort. But I'm sorry to say I found it incredibly annoying. Very clean art anyways
4/5
thanks dude!! I´m sorry you found it annoying, maybe it was the fact that it was a more or less corny song??? anyway thanks for taking time to check it i´ll try to do it a lot better next time!!!
nice one
that was a nice animation. your drawings were very nice.... you definitely have some nice drawing talents. i didn't care too much for the song in this one... i found it to be a little bit sappy, but i did enjoy this one either way.... especially your drawings. you show a lot of potential, i look forward to seeing more from you in the near future.