Needs more!
The intro and drop are a little too short and should be extended longer, and you should possibly add in some SFX or upward sweeps to smooth out the transition.
Next I would recommend adding in a thicker synth and bass line. Because the ones that are in this track currently are too weak!
Overall this has some serious potential! Because I also make some house music. Check out my song DurpDurp. It was 1st place in the weekly 5 a few weeks ago.
4/5 9/10
Cheers!