Well...
It is interesting how you used some pizzicato strings in this song. But really this is not something I would really get into all that much. But you asked for a review, so here I am.
I think the mix of instruments, both synths and sampled real strings together, helps to make this sort of work. The first minute or so of the song is probably the best in my opinion. The middle section that sort of backs off a bit volume wise is sorta weak. I would do some work there to change things up a bit.
Honestly, the song just doesn't flow really all that well. There is no significant pattern of play. I'm not saying you should repeat the same patterns over and over when writing a song. But there is no real rhyme or reason to where and why sections change or flow from one into another.
The overall sound is not bad. The song's structure just really didn't do anything for me. But I'm really not a fan of trance music, so maybe that is part of it.
3/5 and 7/10 overall. Decent song, but could definitely use some work.
-Gravey-