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Reviews for "Paper Lighter - Enteroar"

The start sounds like something out of a puzzle

One of those puzzle games you get for Nintendo DS. Overall a pretty sweet and uplifting track. Nothing is sticking out in terms of levels. Your sounds all seem well mastered.

I just wasn't sure on the drums, they're a bit flat. Although the hi hat fits pretty well. I think it's the clap mostly, you should also put a bit more variation in the drums.

Overall i liked this track a lot :)

9/10
5/5

Enteroar responds:

Aw, that sucks lol. My goal in this song was to change the drums abit lol.
Oh well, thanks anyways! :D
~Enteroar

Mesmerizing intro.

Usage of instruments, synths and effects are very good.

I don't really like the transitions and progressions. It's like something different pops out of nowhere. The mastering could be better.

Overall, it's okay. Keep it up!

Enteroar responds:

Yea...the first trasition into the lead/bass is good, but then it sucks otherwise xD

Ive totally taught myself how to master/mix all based from one online video :@

Thanks :)
~Enteroar

Well...

It is interesting how you used some pizzicato strings in this song. But really this is not something I would really get into all that much. But you asked for a review, so here I am.

I think the mix of instruments, both synths and sampled real strings together, helps to make this sort of work. The first minute or so of the song is probably the best in my opinion. The middle section that sort of backs off a bit volume wise is sorta weak. I would do some work there to change things up a bit.

Honestly, the song just doesn't flow really all that well. There is no significant pattern of play. I'm not saying you should repeat the same patterns over and over when writing a song. But there is no real rhyme or reason to where and why sections change or flow from one into another.

The overall sound is not bad. The song's structure just really didn't do anything for me. But I'm really not a fan of trance music, so maybe that is part of it.

3/5 and 7/10 overall. Decent song, but could definitely use some work.

-Gravey-

Enteroar responds:

Yeaaa, Ima violin player so I thought Id try to add something different to it! :)

Think song was really an expriment, but I DID try having a structure in this song! Guess you didnt notice it );

That was something I had a lot of trouble with is trying to make it flow well, it drove me nuts. I spent like 2 hours trying to get it to flow. Can you message me some suggestions on how to make my songs flow?

Thanks for review sir! :P
~Enteroar

Great Job

Its more of a laid back techno that you don't see much of these days. Most of them now are either way too fast to dance to or have some extremely obnoxious sounding theme. This song seems very versatile from being used for games to relaxing at home. I'd love to see more of this.

5/5 10/10

Enteroar responds:

Yep, I wanted to try and creature something new!
Thanks.
~Enteroar

Really liked it!

You are definitely on the "good way"!! .. (whatever that means...)

really liked it. A very thoughtful song.

Enteroar responds:

You made me lol with the "you are definitely on the "good way," comment. xD
Thanks brooooo :D
~Enteroar