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Reviews for "Paper Lighter - Enteroar"

Quite different

When I hear this song, I know it breaks the mold of all the other songs submitted around here. It remains fast and techno-y, but it sounds different.

And because it sounds good at the same time, you get an automatic ten.

Some of the things I like are your use of 'classic' instruments in your song. Synths can only get you so far and only about 1/3 of techno can pull off leaning on it 100%.

Enteroar responds:

Thanks a lot! :)
Im really happy so many people like its different-ness :D
~Enteroar

Its a special style

that melodie and instrument you used like an arp was really good, the other to be honest it had some parts offbeat correct me if that was intentionally, but that dislikes me a bit. anyway still good job :)

Enteroar responds:

lol offbeat? ive been making for music for 3 years now, none of this is off beat, not to be mean or anything.

But thanks for the review...
~Enteroar

hmm

I don't know what all these guys are on about, they're being too picky lol.. Sure, the transitions are a little different sounding and you don't have a crash hot bassline, but it is still a great track. The soft drums were a plus for me, even though im into a strong kick and loud snare with plenty of reverb, it definitely blended in well with the song. Unlike all these recently submitted tracks made all generally with the same principles, this song kind of steps out of the box abit, it's so unpredictable and unique, awesome. definite 5/5.

Enteroar responds:

Thanks man! You got what I was trying to do! finally :') -tear-
~Enteroar

Nice

Good change of pace from all the quick,fast songs submited so often now

Enteroar responds:

Thanks for the review!
Yep, trying to change it up you know? :)
~Enteroar

great instrument selection

but I agree, your structure is all over the place after the first minute.

it starts off so beautifully too! kinda weird how you introduce the drums and then cut them out as soon as you bring em in.

the drums themselves sound kinda weak, eq them so that they stand out a bit.

also, where's the bass? :d I'm a huge bass nut and am kinda disappointed that I'm not feeling -any- in this track. it's all mids-highs!

hmm, what happened at 2:40? volume just fades and song changes. sounded really odd.

generally when transitioning between segments you want the notes (at the end of the 8 bars you're leaving and start of the new 8 you're going into) you're playing to interact in a way that's either pleasing to the ears in a harmonic way for a smooth transition or makes a stark contrast and change drastically when going from style to style.

you've definitely got a great ear for melodies. start adding some basslines in and watch how it changes your thinking of harmony and structure. sometimes all you have to do is change the bassline to make a section different, while keeping the other elements. bass is a powerful thing. :)

Enteroar responds:

I only did that cus if I didnt introduce something new it sounded repetitive, but if I continued them longer it didnt fit with the intro.

Im just a fan of soft drums lol :@ and btw there was bass D: the bassline plays through out most of the song.

@2:40 I was just trying to figure out a way to end the song! D:

thanks from all the advice durn!
~Enteroar