Great look ...
It looks good, it's got a good style and the sound was good too.
I've got two questions though - why wasn't that girl afraid of anything? and what happened to the boy that was with her outside?
Reviews for "Grimly Manor trailer"
BADMAN responds:
I'm not sure yet why she's not afraid. Mainly because I havent designed a scared face yet. Also I think it's creepier that she's not freaking out or anything. There is actually alot more of this story to do. More ghosts, more spooky sets and a giant escher stairwell. Some is finished... But I decided to focus only on the ghosts of the family in the picture for the Halloween Trailer. In the final movie I'm going to try to make it all fit together... but right now i just need to stop so I can party a little for halloween. :)
not bad
this is alright
Nice job getting 1st place this week!
I thought it was very good exept for the gun shot. I think you guys have what it takes to be #1 every time! Good job!
BADMAN responds:
we're just one person. thank you!
MMMMMhhh
hey i like the flash but there was no story to it who was the owner of the house and no one talked. There was like one thing of violence too, there should have been more. The only spooky thing in that was the music and the girl in the red. I think if she was in it more in the 2nd one it will be much better.
BADMAN responds:
Yeah it's just a halloween trailer.
You'll find out in a month or two.
(...provided i don't have to stop for a paying gig.)
It was good. Needs a little improvement
The animation in this movie was great. However, i couldn't really see much of a storyline, It seemed much like a random haunted house at first, later on perhaps some suggested past is given when the girl looks angryly at the ghost (?). Some sugestions is that you use some sounds to set the mood. Sounds that are chilling or simply just incoherent. voted 3
BADMAN responds:
it is the Truth you speak...
I'm workin on it! :)