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^^Good Points^^
This was a fair submission. You did an excellent job with the drawings. I liked how they were constantly changing slightly. The angles were just about perfect, you did an excellent job with making this realistic. The music also went well with this.
^^Needs Improving^^
I would have liked this much better if it were colored or at least had some type of storyline, even if a small one was incorporated.
I will probably do more in the future that hav storylines and colour. This one was just trying out the technique and seeing what the Newgrounds response would be (in this case, awesome). The funny thing is that this took almost no skill (except with the line tool, lol) and almost three weeks, it's only 30 seconds long, and it got awesome reviews. The Wrath of Dicey, which is like 2 minutes long, took awesome Flash skills, and took me almost three months, got OK reviews. LOL.
cool one
that was a pretty cool animation. nice FBF style to it, good drawings and sketches, cool audio and it was fun to watch. your efforts were very nice in this one as well.... made it all the more better to watch.
Thanks, Kwastikck (hope I got your name right)! I enjoyed making it...If you really liked it, submit it to collection Experimental, that's where all the cool stuff is.
I didn't much like it
You must have spent some time on it, but it was not all that good.
No comment.
Meh...
I know you tried & all that, and yes, I know, believe me, tracing all those lines SUCKS, but all I really saw was a bunch of black scribbles. Not much quality, story, humor, violence... Anything at all. So, there's not really any entertainment value. At all. I mean, kudos for trying, but make it something more interesting than a 10-second walk through a house made of black, crappily-animated lines on a white background. Please. Just because you busted your ass for a billion hours making a crappy flash, doesn't change the fact that it is, indeed, a crappy flash. I would give a zero but I don't want to COMPLETELY crush your soul, I mean... You DID trace all them lines, and yes, you did work very hard. But a 1 isn't much reimbursement, now is it? Well, that's what you get, Stay in school.
Ah. A negative review, but nontheless a helpful one. My soul is INCOMPLETELY crushed :P