cool stuff =)
has a good melody, lots of potential in this track, enough that I think I'll take the time to remix it ;)
great work with the filters, you did well with the variation in this too.
cons: some of the notes are a little out of place at times, and don't really fit in the song all that well, and your kick is kinda weak.
pros: lots of improvement here, sounds like your put more effort into this track. Not much else I didn't already say at the top of this post. ^
I'd give it an 9/10, 5/5
keep up the improvement!
-TC-