Just a notch better than typical spam.
I hate the voices, oh my god i can't respresent how much i hate the voices.
The clay animation looks like something my non-existant 2 year old brother would make.
The best part was when he freaked out on the Coca-Cola, and the end.
You got motion stopping skills, just improve the story/claymation/voice acting.
Trust me, it will get MUCH better-that was only the beginning. I've already got more proffesional looking claymen, and i was just "testing" what i could do. Ther ewill also be a story.
thanks for the tips, though.
Wow, that was such a rip-off.
Okay, listen. Don't ever submit something like that again. Now I'm not discouraging you from making more claymations, as your animation skills show a lot of potential, but please for the love of God, do something different. Seriously, there are endless numbers of claymations now-a-days that are Knox-rip offs. If you're going to make a claymation, please sculpt characters, make it your own. Don't just take blue blobs and manipulate them around, add some detail. Also, backrounds would be nice. Secondly, the last person was right, you should not be doing the voices. Also, please make the story a little original, not just pure randomness like Knox's clay movies. Make it your own style, you know. Make a story or something. Listen, as far as animating goes, you're pretty good, keep it up, but please take my suggestions. Also, you have to get rid of that trial thing.
*sigh* you do not believe how many people i've said this to (no offence). I'm about to buy SMP, so the text will be gone. I'm really young, so i can't really hire a voice actor. That movie was just the start, it will have a big storyline. Hope that unties a few knots. Anyway, glad you like my animation skills!
bad
i like clay toons but this one sucked
yeah... it wasn't my best work, but it'll get better!
what a copyer
yeah your not knox
yeah sorry about the knox stuff, i was starting out... any suggestions for next time?
Meh, looked like a ripoff.
First of all, the entire movie looked like a ripoff of Knox's work. Even the style you made your characters was his style. So you get no points for style. However, I do know how hard it is to do decent clay animations. But get your own style please.
And get a preloader. I read the other review, and if you don't have flash, then you really shouldn't be here. ^_^
i tried as hard as i could to not make it seem like a rip-off of Knox's stuff, only the men and the co-co-cola were like Knox. and that was just the beginning-it will get better, i swear.