Claymate
That was really funny. A couple of parts went on a little long, like the blood drip and sipping the cola. You already explained your bad looking clay people, so I won't get into that. Overall, great job and I hope to see more of your work.
Reviews for "Just A Day In ClayWorld"
TamiyaGuy responds:
you-you actually love this? You, man, have made my day! Glad you found it funny!
Very interesting
I really hope you answer my review first of all. now let's talk about you're flash here now shal we? k. i'll start first of all, you really need to convert the flash to a greather quality of grphics whithouth affecting the movie playing process, second of all try to make a better qaulity audio trak in youre movie, about the story, I didn't quite understand it but the idea was prety good, some of the special graphics efects where good, try next time to put some more features, and las but not least, you should really try on mending that demo version thing, some of the viwers don't like to read the same 2 words in all of the movie, like "demo version"...
Good job anyway for this flash... and answer my review so I know you have read it!!!!!!
TamiyaGuy responds:
Thanks for liking the movie! i'm really glad that some people understand that it is more of a 'tribute' to Knox than a 'rip-off'. Yeah, sorry about the story, but i was just starting off, y'know, looking for ideas. Also, you'll be glad to hear, i'm buying the full version, so no more annoying text (i found it just as annoying as you did). Also sorry that you found it too bad quality, but interestingly, i actually made it in Windows Movie Maker, then converted it to Flash, so i had to sacrifice alot of stuff (coz i can't really spend £500-i'm too young), so once i get flash, the quality will improve.
Hope you look forward to seeing my up-and-coming movies! Also glad you voted 7!
Its new but you did alright
I have to say it was not the most stupendous piece yet you showed some great progress. I felt you managed to make your characters look like they are speaking. The movement was quite fluid. Your blood pooling looked pretty sharp. Keep having fun and don't ever listen to people who say you can't animate.
Funny thing you don't sound like you are from the UK but they say the same about my New England accent.
TamiyaGuy responds:
THANKS, MAN!!! it's really uplifting that you concentrate on the actual movie, not just yakking on about 'how it's a rip-off of Knox'. Also i'm really happy that you liked the movement of the characters-it took me a while! Oh, and i worked really hard on the sounds-you would not believe how much my throat hurt after that!!!
Thank You!!!
you got my 5 bro
Hey!! i also make clay animations and i know how hard it is :P
It was nice, but kinda stupid.. (no offence)
here are a few suggestions for your next work!
- Get other voice actors.. or atleasy try harder to change your voice!
- The voice acting was in a GOOD quality! but wasent good, if u kno wut i mean :/
- DONT EVER copy knox!! yes yes i know u didnt try to rip off his work but still the "co co cola" was stupid and its his joke :(
- Think of better jokes :P it's hard but ANYONE can do it!
- More violence please =]
- dont movie the camera so much.. just put CLAY or SUMTHING under it!! its rly anoying when it moves like that :(
- Work harder on the clay guys cuz they dont look well.. I KNOW U CAN DO IT :D
- More charecters,creatures,places and items :P
GET A PRELOADER! ITS SIMPLE JUST DOWNLOAD THE NEWGROUND 1
Thats it :P good luck
TamiyaGuy responds:
Thanks, man!
I am currently working on the claymen and they will be better-still styled like Knox's though.
As to copying knox, i was kinda trying to get ideas, so the stuff will change.
Violence, i'm creating another that will have Knives, Dual Pistols, Shotguns, AKs AND a Mounted Machine Gun! Enough violence?
Creatures-i'm doing a Mario Bros styled one, so i think that's covered.
THE CAMERA: if you read the full notes, you would have seen that I DIDN'T DO THE WOBBLY BITS, my friend did.
i can see what you mean about the voices-i'm from the UK and i'm, like really young.
Also, is there any way to link a preloader to a non-flash movie? I don't want to spend £500 on Flash just so i can use a preloader.
But anyway, thanks for the review and tips!
PS the reason it was stupid was it was really a 'test' to see what i could do-it will get better.
higher a voice actor
The stop animations was nice, but your annoying voice really took away from this movie. Also try and take out the text that says, "stop motion pro trial".
TamiyaGuy responds:
yea, sorry about the text-i was...uhh... using the stop motion pro trial...;-) I'm in the middle of buying it, so that will be gone soon. Sorry if you hated my voice, but i'm [insert really young age here] and i'm not really old enough/in the state to hire a voice actor. Sorry. Glad you liked the actual movie though!