Reviews for mouse game tutorial

[k13ran22]

Thanks

Thanks i made my first ever flash game with this

yodd responds:

Oh cool, thats what it is there for.

[rageace]

Very Good

This is a brief, but very good tutorial and I liked it.

yodd responds:

Thanks for your review, sir. this is not my best. for a better tutorial check out "all around tutorial".

[IceDragon64]

Looks OK

I don't do much actionscript so I can't judge that much , but it looks OK as far as I can see. I might try making my own cursor, that could be cool.

Afew small details:

Make a proper hit area for your back & forward buttons. At the moment the thin green line is the hit area, so if you click in the middle of the arrow, as people will, it doesn't work. Just go into the last part of the button maker which most people ignore and make a fair sized rectangle.

whos/who's

in Step 1 the actionscript covers a bit of the text.

yodd responds:

This was mostly an excuse to submit somethign useful to newgrounds, glad you like it. Fatal killed my cats

[SniperWolf1564]

Pretty good.

The tutorial is pretty good, just that the buttons have to be clicked on the green part and is not clickable on the inside, and the text seems to go outside the window. Apart from that, the tutorial is pretty good.

yodd responds:

lol thanks, made in 20 minutes... fatal killed my cats

[AdomNintendoFreak]

Yes...

It is helpful, but I kinda had to highlight and cut+paste text to read everything. The "next" and "previous" buttons were done poorly, in that you had to click on a narrow outline to use them.

But it is useful...barely good enough for keeping in "Flash help".

Remember, Flash tutorials are NOT games by themselves.

yodd responds:

lol, thanks made in 20 minutes. Yepp my preloader says game! who knows why o.O. fatal killed my cats...