Reviews for mouse game tutorial

[Thelittlerich]

I liked the music!

This is a poor attempt at providing a tutorial!

For one, you have not provided a demonstration of how the finished actionscript will work, and for 2, you haven't worked on this for very long. Your buttons are unlickable unles you take the time to click on the edges. Half the time, they don't go back to the previous page.

The main reason I like this flash is that I REALLY like the tune you're playing on it! What version of "What Is Love" by Haddaway is this?! and could you get in touch with me so I could find out please?

Otherwise, you have a good tutorial in the making!

yodd responds:

lol, review zero, harsh... very harsh, almost unfair for it does give an explanation. its what is love by neosoviet, gtfo and click the link now. fatal killed my cats

[IceDragon64]

Looks OK

I don't do much actionscript so I can't judge that much , but it looks OK as far as I can see. I might try making my own cursor, that could be cool.

Afew small details:

Make a proper hit area for your back & forward buttons. At the moment the thin green line is the hit area, so if you click in the middle of the arrow, as people will, it doesn't work. Just go into the last part of the button maker which most people ignore and make a fair sized rectangle.

whos/who's

in Step 1 the actionscript covers a bit of the text.

yodd responds:

This was mostly an excuse to submit somethign useful to newgrounds, glad you like it. Fatal killed my cats

[killer12180]

nice

Hey nice tut! i always wanted to do something like this! :D

yodd responds:

glad you liked, fatal killed my cats

[possibly-yodd]

You helped me so much

My turn ot help you!

yodd responds:

fatal killed my cats

[AdomNintendoFreak]

Yes...

It is helpful, but I kinda had to highlight and cut+paste text to read everything. The "next" and "previous" buttons were done poorly, in that you had to click on a narrow outline to use them.

But it is useful...barely good enough for keeping in "Flash help".

Remember, Flash tutorials are NOT games by themselves.

yodd responds:

lol, thanks made in 20 minutes. Yepp my preloader says game! who knows why o.O. fatal killed my cats...