Reviews for RANDOM!!!

[Kamikazetomato]

Probably won't pass for one reason:

You said you're 13 and that this basically grants you amnesty from criticism. The exact opposite is the case. Not only do most people dislike younger animators who are far from experts, but PLAYING the age card is just dumb.

You also need plot and more color. The actual art and animation are pretty good, but still, never comment on your age and get a decent plot down, and you're set.

Not that this is the best movie I've ever seen, but the --potential-- for goodness in your future is much more visible than most newcomers.

Hope this passes, and good luck either way.

[ste-b]

alrite

i thought that was alrite actually, but yea, ur age dusnt really alter how good ur flashed are/shud be, but the graphics wer pretty cool, slightly weird tho ;) 4/5

[MrGibbo]

Its ok

Of the clips in there some of them where good the thing is you need to expand n finish them rathter then jumping about if you just worked on one idea it would work well :) gl with flashes

[Thelittlerich]

Not bad! (Could be better...)

When I read the description, I was thinking this was gonna be another "BLAM" movie, so I was surprised by the effort you've put into it!
As the review blow mentioned, the sound made the file a lot bigger than it needed to be. It didn't bother me (I'm on Broadband), but Dial-up users would benefit from it more.
You show a lot of patience the fact that you've done this FBF, but may I suggest looking at motion and shape tweening as other options, as this could really speed up the time it takes you.

Sound effects would help us to understand what each sketch is about, as would more detailed drawings. The muscle guy was quite detailed, so it was easy to see what was happening, but some of the other ones were too sketchy and too quick to get what they were.

I could start actually analysising the fact you have an "eating" theme running through this, and how this could either be a glimpse into your psyche, but I won't... LOL! Keep it up!

Mantlion responds:

thank you 4 the amasin review you must be really expeirenced

[jamesyboyy]

wtf

lol that was.............................swell im voteing 3 or 4 cuzz that had style

Mantlion responds:

thanx