yeah..
the was....interesting
Reviews for "RANDOM!!!"
Not bad! (Could be better...)
When I read the description, I was thinking this was gonna be another "BLAM" movie, so I was surprised by the effort you've put into it!
As the review blow mentioned, the sound made the file a lot bigger than it needed to be. It didn't bother me (I'm on Broadband), but Dial-up users would benefit from it more.
You show a lot of patience the fact that you've done this FBF, but may I suggest looking at motion and shape tweening as other options, as this could really speed up the time it takes you.
Sound effects would help us to understand what each sketch is about, as would more detailed drawings. The muscle guy was quite detailed, so it was easy to see what was happening, but some of the other ones were too sketchy and too quick to get what they were.
I could start actually analysising the fact you have an "eating" theme running through this, and how this could either be a glimpse into your psyche, but I won't... LOL! Keep it up!
Mantlion responds:
thank you 4 the amasin review you must be really expeirenced
Good
It was good. But it was too sloppy, some color would be cool... the rest was ok. GJ though...
It was decent
Can't give you too many points unfortunately, especially due to the lack of coherence.
Seems like you've done everything frame by frame, even when not necessary, I appreciate the effort, but you should play around with flash more so you can gain some knowledge.
I appreciated the joke about the guy flexing his muscles and veins appearing everywhere, but maybe they should have appeared more random.
Cleaning up your art would be nice. Also, color couldnt hurt. And some soundeffects.
Also, get a sound editing program, because the filesize was about 10 times biggerthan necessary, I think.
But there's a lot of potential there. You could be real big.
~B
Nice
Wow, that wasn't that bad, especially since you're only 13. I don't know whether or not it deserves to be blammed, but considering it has no real point, probably. But you definitely showed some good animation. Sound would be nice, as well as coloring, and actually having a point. Good luck.
Mantlion responds:
good advice