...ok, and?
If you want constructive commentaries: The text at the beginning is too dark and it goes away to quickly. The graphics were good but try putting more time into your "end credits" because it looks really cheap. Other than that - make it longer...(of course) and put some action in it. Good start.
The animation wasn't bad...
It just lacked a good storyline... & the music cut off kindof abruptly!! I think with a little work, and a few "Band-Aids", this could be really good!! You have something here, so don't give up!!
well....
It's ok I guess.... I mean the Artwork is actually not THAT good, but I gave you a little bit of hope for your next try. However I like the music you played, but it's from halo 2, not from halo 3, which means it's not accurate. Also you might wanna extend your animation besides the little walkout scene.... kinda disaponting. I thought, YES NOW HE'LL SHOOT, but no.... nothing happened... get the point? Well alright.... whatever.... good luck with your next one. If you need help PM me, since newgrounds has that new function ;)
not long enough
i thought this was ok but it was way too short. also the trees and the shipd crashing looked kinda tacky the way they were drawn, sorta squiggly lines and such. it was ok but the movie was as long as the opening credits
Good But......
This was an ok first movie, it could use better graphics and could be a lot longer, i also would like to see more.