Looking foward to the full thing...
Gotta say, man i love halo 2, i mean my logo is the halo 2 symbols of me and my 2 other friends combined. Well you want a bit of advice huh? ok here's a bit.
1) i kno u'll make it longer, but incase u weren't thinking about it, u better.
2)work on the atmosphere entry effects for the ships, they look like crappy blood at the moment. give it like a glowing orange look breaking through air.
3) make master cheif's helmet look a bit better, the visor looked a little messed up and his armor was too dark a green. Pay attention to the helmet, chest, and hands, that's what people look at most.
4) last but certainly not least, work on that spelling lol, make sure it's perfect, cuz u spelled "too" as "to"
Good luck man, let me kno when u let out the real deal
~Shadow636