I thought this was great.
And I normally hate clowns. Great job. I foresaw the ending where the mime betrays him, though.
I thought this was great.
And I normally hate clowns. Great job. I foresaw the ending where the mime betrays him, though.
wow
that was really good, and touching sort of except the whole gimp thing.
you are obviously a very creative and inspired artist and i hope you can keep producing these
Very Artistic
I loved how you visualised the world as it is today. Your message at the end was also beautiful. The baloon, I think, was showing him it was free by being let go. I loved this and hope you give it your all on your next submission as well! 4 months and 11 days have paid off my freind!
ummm
cool but i really dont care for the more than sad ending.
Great Job
Well thought out plot. I loved the transition that stayed on the house and tracked the course of the day until he returned. I loved how you only showed him in clown until he took off his makeup and nose in the mirror. It was a clever, simple transformation of character. I liked the plot and the wierdness of it. I liked the "It's Hopless" woman at the beginning and end. Very very clever and well done. I believe the text was cropped in your work, which rewards the savy watcher. I liked how you made your character a sympathetic focus. He felt human.