Dude this was fantastic, but 1 thing.
Where was the voices sound?I heard a little out of the sound.Other than the sound thing this is good stuff.I am givin u a 4 because of the voices .4 months eh, at least u put effort, or i would have given it a 0.
good job!
good job! waht a fucking bitch!! your graphics were really great! your sound tho was a lil bad but over all good
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That mime son of a bitch!!! Im not good at writing in depth reviews...but good job.
Best Clown-Based Movie I've Ever Seen
This is exactly what I like about short stories. Enough length to get you to understand the fundamental nature of the main character, enough going on for the story to feel as though it continues to move without trouble, and a twist just before the end.
The ending itself, the real-life scenario of what can happen when giving your heart to a selfish, materialistic woman, was brilliant. Depressing as hell, but I love this kind of noir true outlook on life, mixed with a perfect sort of humor.
It wasn't -perfect-, so I couldn't score it a ten on the review, but rest assured my 5 is yours.
Amazing.
People would buy this kind of stuff! The only reason I gave you a 9 is due to sound. If you made a feature length of this, I'll bet it'd sell like crazy. Very good plot with an amazing ending.