Very Classy
For your 1st submission its really great. All I can sugest is maybe a loading bar and next cartoon put some more background in. All tho I found the white background to be very effective in this
Reviews for "Jet Pack"
Good but short
Dude that was just awesome :) I like your style and the way you connect normal and motion tween animation. As for the tips, you should try animating hands some more because it's the only thing that doesn't look magnificent :). And maybe pay a bit more attention to drawing straight lines, the jetpack wasn't ,ooking too "technical" in one scene.
The sound is good, and the music gets you in the right mood for the upcoming action. It didn't make me laugh but it was still pretty funny :).
Make a longer movie next time plz ^.^
Woah! serious its ur first>?
Well i cant really give ya constructive criticism cus i aint a flash animator.. but i can say that I enjoyed it by heaps! Graphics were actually quite good and like i liked the bg music it just gave off that the light-hearted humour feel to it! Along with the whole short storyline. so Great job mate! looking forward to your future works!
Woooth?
LOOL
I mean it good work, like your style but get some more varied frames into it, the smoke just had 2 different frames but it was good.
I liked it
5out of 5 becuse i just had a lol
Decent first
A bad point, atleast for me, was the smoke after the blastoff and the way it repeated itself and actuall went past the flyer.
Other than that, good job!
*Gives an encouraging pat in the back*