random goes to a point
all flashes are funny or have violence they have something in that made you like the flash. i gave this a 5 cause u can animate but the guys that gave this a 10. i think he is doing drugs, this flash did not have that something. If u make it through thats fine, but promise me you will spend more type on storyline and less time making it long. That movie sucked im sorry you need to make better storyline!
umm
that was strange, didnt really get the story( if it was one?).
I agree with the last guy
Far, far too much posing. I know that it's a lot easier and quicker to 'animate' something when it's essentially a montage of stills, but to me it's one corner too many that you've cut. Your characters are already made out of very basic shapes, and they have floating limbs - things which make them a lot less time-consuming to animate. You've also used white slashes on a black screen instead of animating them actually hitting each other.
But you haven't actually animated them, really - just shown them in a variety of still frames, with some slight tweening to give the illusion that they're moving and not posing. As a result, the flow of events is anything but smooth, and what's going on is hard to follow. A pretty lazy attempt overall.
not soo good(yes,soo)
your beggining dosent match the song well, maybe you can find a better heading in a staredown.(i dunno, just suggesting) most people wouldve clicked the x before they get to the good part,it just wasnt 'pulling' or 'rangsang' enough.
I dont come onto newgrounds to watch slideshows
next time make it an animation not a bunch of pictures moving about. I cut u some slack though as its ur first submission