well
First off, the start reminded me of star wars. when they slid down the hill and flew off the jump reminded me of sonic. the gray robots reminded me of bomberman 64. Way to many Fade ins and outs, secondly, the battle was so much like the lord of the rings. At last Why in the hell did the blue guy let th other guy go??
I had no idea at wha tthe hell was going on
I kinda zoned out near the end, liked the music, I got the idea that they were fighting but you need to think of another way for transiton instead of fading to black.
it was good...
i'm impressed by the graphics and how you animated it. the only prob is that it lacked some movements for the fighting scenes. also lacked sound effects but overall it was a good flash for your first submission. keep it up and i hope some more flash from you in the future. peace out dude.
Good but in need of work.
It's a nice idea and this would probably make a rather good flash series but there are some bad points I'd like to point out:
1. The movements were very limited, usually only by minimalistic movements such as (what I think is) a hell of a lot of motion tweening. It's used in anime and it could be justified in small doses but it severly limits what this flash could have been by the fact it's used horrendously often.
2. To me the characters look a bit stereotypical and bland. Two of the characters looked very Megamanish while the others I have seen scattered around a lot. The robots were also pretty much metal Raymen.
3. It was a bit short for a fight scene and it could've had a lot more action and a bit less randomness.
Not to say this is bad. It's one of better first flash movies I've seen (first on Newgrounds anyway) and it could be successful but it's lacking in some areas you could say.
pretty aweson music
need blood isnt¿