She needs a needs a rating catagory for "Darkness"
Nice work.
My few criticizems (like I have a right to make any at all) are;
1) the fluidity ofthe breeze in her hair.
2) no sense of urgency in the flashback.
3) I wanna know more...
The chaos, darkness, and calmness of the action made the emotional desolation of your characters very real. I like the detail, and emotion, without being weightd down.
The room for expansion is endless.
I wish you many great episodes, partly because I'm selfish and want to find out what next. (If the little girl becomes a vampire hunter, don't give her automatic weapons)
Just my opinions....A. SH.