Good job!
I liked this alot but the audio problems make i damn near impossible to hear man. Still nice touches anyhow.
Reviews for "Sin Angel pt1"
That was pretty intense
I can't wait to see this story progress even further. the only problem you're having is the audio control of the voices. i have to watch it many times on certain parts to hear what they were saying. hope you improve on that on your next episode.
Short, but good.
The drawing were amazing! If you do that on the computer, I'd love to see your, (or, whoever drew, them.) that you make on paper.
And like some many people have pointed out before, better sound, please. Oh, and don't mind the humor, I thought that little just said, "hi!" to her dad, and he ended dying, I thought it was a tad funny. Sick?
Why, yes I am.
I'm from wisconsin too!
I think I have the plot here... I guess the woman at the beginning got raped by an incubus, she has a half demon child, the purple winged lady (child) saw an old stepdad of hers with a new child, he has said hurtful things about her to her mother so she hurts/kills him, and then the demon lady has a flashback about where the incubus kills her mother....
Miaka618 responds:
wow...that's pretty good. I was beginning to think that it was too cryptic.
Sin Angel soon to have it's own spot.
I mean it. Realy good drawing of the characters and background. But some of the lines were a little bad. But with that note i'm not that great with drawing so you do what you do. Sounds were a little quieter and i had to turn my speakers to near max to hear. Work on sound. Style you have a great story plot head but it is a little old but than our society was built on remaking stuff to improve it and add our touch. Violence was pretty brutal but it's called Sin Angel so i excepted as much. Humour none and Interactivity none.
P.S. You must love purple.
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