Nice Job
The animation was excellent. And I would love to see a series of this. The only problem was the audio. Even with my speakers turned all the way up I could barely hear what was being said. Maybe add some subtitles if you can't get the audio clear enough to hear. But keep up the good work, this was very nicely done.
All I can is
Wow
Could use some polishing, but inntruigeafyin'.
Have to take a point off for the audio, but other than that it was good. Somewhat interesting; I could get into another one. Give this a nice solid 8/10, 4/5. Fa shiz...or whatever.
Most excellent
Congratulations on using Matura MT Script Capitals as a font! That was a really nice flash, the mothing was reasonably smooth without lagging on my sad, depressingly slow computer and the plot seems quite promising. I'll keep my eyes open for the series!
good
not bad. nice artwork but i couldnt understand anything from the voices muffled hope next part comes soon