Rape, Blood, Violence
I'm suspecting the only way in hell that chick was born is if that demon thing raped her mom... which is like, what the hell? you made this for SCHOOL? lol, god you'd better either be in college or some fucked up school that's not somthin i see my teachers lettin put up without being like "WTF!?"
yeah, college.
Your talent is evident
It's apparent that you have a knack for this. I really liked the style of your animation, and you've already addressed this flash's shortcomings in your own comments. There's more positives here, though. ; )
Nice stuff, please keep it up!
wierd..
wow, that was really wierd and twisted. huh...
You got yourself some talent, there.
Critics first:
It was way to short for an intro movie, and quite devoid of information. You need to both make it longer and add more elements pertaining to your overall story.
That, and find a better means to record your sound.
Other than that, you did a very nice job animating, and I am hoping to see more, so you've hooked my attention. Keep it up.
Well...
Great grapics. I guess you find out more about the story as more short flashes of the series goes on, but you cud hav atleast explained wuy was up with that girl in the beginning of the flash. 4 those of you who were wondering wut the Sin Angel was saying in the flash back, she was asking why she had wings.