Short, but good.
The drawing were amazing! If you do that on the computer, I'd love to see your, (or, whoever drew, them.) that you make on paper.
And like some many people have pointed out before, better sound, please. Oh, and don't mind the humor, I thought that little just said, "hi!" to her dad, and he ended dying, I thought it was a tad funny. Sick?
Why, yes I am.
Most excellent
Congratulations on using Matura MT Script Capitals as a font! That was a really nice flash, the mothing was reasonably smooth without lagging on my sad, depressingly slow computer and the plot seems quite promising. I'll keep my eyes open for the series!
Good Job
I really like this and I hope to see more. The only thing that you reeeeally need to work on is the sound. Even after turning the sound all the way up I still had trouble hearing. But over all, you did a good job.
This looks like a good beginning
The reason this got a five for sound was that I found myself turning the volume up on my speakers just a bit to high. Not only that but the music seemed to drown out the speaking audio. Regard less of that you did a good job otherwise.
your good
i like that it was good i cant wait to see some more