good one!!
the graphics are very good not many can do that !! but...(there is always the "but") the story is not that good! you should give a little more backround story to the main person and give her a voice!!!! thats a good idea!!! you got talent but you foreget the things i said above!! keep it up and can be one of the best!!!!!
Hey miaka
first time ive seen you one newgrounds.One question april......did you take you pills today? Im just kidding i love finaly being able to see your avatar in action
hiya!! glad you could see it.
Wow!
Nice solid story. Love the work you put in on the characters, especially the one in the beginning ; )
major flaw
a solid animation with a good plot. you have the making for an awsome series. couple that with the fact that you have serious potential as an animator i can only see good things for you in NG. however the sound quality needs work. its difficult to hear what anyone is saying throughout the whole thing. sadly its that flaw that holds back this submission. 2 outta 5
Very Nice
Clearly some good artistic talent, cool plot and was fun to watch. Alot of potential ... little more practice and you could make some killer flashes. One thing (and I hate to be a jerk) but the sound quality is garbage and I can barely tell what there saying. Other than that - sweet flash