Reviews for Sin Angel pt1

[BlackCaliber]

Exceptional graphics but choppy plot

At the beginning, I was impressed by the art. The characters looked cool and the color scheme was half decent. It was pretty consistent most of the way through with a few exceptions (that guy was disintegrated in an explosion of jello) even if the characters were a little outlandish. The story was awkward. Did her mother even notice her kid had wings!? She was living a normal life and I found that awkward but that wasn't too big a deal. Suddenly the mother dies and you feel bad for the character but then she goes off and kills that little girl's father. I realize this is just the first part to a series so try to sew these patches together with some drama. The story kept shifting and there wasn't any build up. I'm pretty psyched to see what you do next.

[Randall-Laine]

It has potential if you work at it.

I'm not experianced at this kind of thing, but it seems to me that all actions within the thing came and ended too quickly. The sounds were short and all parts of violence within, could be lengthened even though most of it is unseen. (which is good, it gives room for imagination.) The blood which goes past the girl could have been better and I think if more time was spent on it to make everything just that bit longer or just to add more detail, you might have something. The good thing is that the plot is intriging enough to get people interested since there is many ways that it could go in terms of plot but I think that if you just spend more time on tuning it it'll be that much better. Because quality speaks for itself.

...Was that any help?

[560]

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dude... to be that short it gave me a really good impression of what to come. I mean i feel bad for her mother to get a BFC(big fucking cock) inside of her. And i mean the "Angel" looks really beautifull and..... well enoigh bout dat. *horm* I really liked it and somehow it gave me chills down mah spine.. I reaaaally liked it and want to see more and want to know more about this "Angel"(That is fucking beatifull). And to Squrril_of_Doom i say take out whatever you have in your ears and you go to school coz somehow you havent got anything... like your a dumbass or something??? i think this deserves to be on Daily 1 and Weekly 1

[Squrril-of-Doom]

didn't like it much

I thought the entire thing really was really short. Nothing was explained. They didn't tell why a freakin' vampire was going to school. That right there was bad. It was really bad when she killed the guy just because he said something about her. If she wanted to stay in school then she would have been smart enough not to kill the guy or anyone for that matter. But that matter aside no matter what people would probably be hunting and trying to kill her night and day even if she didn't kill anyone. The characters were far too glitchy and the graphics were not very smooth and well made. Really short and no idea of whats happening at all really doesn't help this at all. I find that this is a bad flash. To me it doesn't deserve to be in the daily top 5.

[BanditosCousinTITO]

the bitch was fucking crazy

that states it all she was fucking crazy