ugh
Like the graphic style alot but the motion just ruins the entire animation. The movement just fucking sucked for the most part. Story was ok until you added the even more retarded "cheetos" deal? c'mon. It was goin fine until u added that shitty-ass play on humor. Weak on that.
Voices...eh, ok, but not preferable in my personal taste. Music....could be better, but the quality wasn't great either.
allinall, you need more work. But points to your drawing style, wasn't all that great but it was better than alot i've seen. Although i feel like I've seen that style somewhere else.