nearly as good as the origonal
well done what were the namse of the song/song used?
Reviews for "Dance of Lies 2-The Curse"
Ehhh...
Sorry but it just doesn't stack up to the original Lilium... Good though...
song
what's the song's name?
Um ok...
I didn't really get it but ok... still good. I like the way the mother and daughter have the same name
I would have liked the music 'Lilium' in the backround so yeh...
the animation was alrite but obviously i cant do better, so uh-huh
and the animation is really epic.
Overall not bad. =)
Alright, time to write an actual review.
I'll give you a 7 simply because (and before people start hitting the useless button below this comment, you might want to listen up), Newgrounds is not a place where you can half-ass a cartoon and expect it to get anywhere. And this, while it seemed like you paid a lot of attention to detail and realism, also contains many small eyesores, such as the cracks that you put in EVERYTHING to make it look more realistic.
The lip sync parts were hilarious. I don't think you got your intended effect across.
I understand you spent a lot of time on this, and before people start flaming and saying I've never used Flash, I'll have you know that I've been working on a piece for a few months now, and it takes much more dedication than a few motion tweens and some lip sync. Why not try some frame by frame animation instead? Don't take that harshly, it's a serious suggestion.
Now, the part where the red background was pulsating and moving was very nicely done. And some of the perspective changes where the camera swings around the room were nice.
All in all, though, this didn't pass the bar as Newgrounds quality in my opinion. But I understand the unrewarding feeling of having your project overlooked amid the sea of other submissions after a ton of work, so I'm giving it a 7.
But hey, you got the Goth section.
Watch out for me, I'll see you there soon.