That was good....
I really liked the twist, it just need to be a little more clear, I think. A nice block-letter "TAG!" when contact is made and then it fades away would have been pretty cool. That's just me though.
Reviews for "Run Ninja Run"
Fische responds:
I thought of doing that, but then someone else told me not to. I think that I'll have to make a general poll and see what the audience thinks is best. Thanks for the review!
good good
thats not that bad, actually, i liked it.
but here's what you need to do: make the background less monotonous, it gets repeptative...fast, maybe make the sizes more proporsioned, despite how great ninjas are, there arent as tall as buildings. maybe make the running a little less repetative, not a bad idea though, nice to see a ninja having fun
Fische responds:
Thank you! This has been the most helpful submission so far. Haha. I realised that the ninjas were as tall as buildings, and I tried to fix it, but I just couldn't make it look right, so I gave up and hoped no one would notice. Suprisingly, no one that I showed it to noticed, but I knew that someone would. When I remake this movie, or fix it up later on, I'll make sure to fix the buildings and the running like you said. The idea of ninjas having a little fun over a game of tag seems to be a pretty popular one though. (You can thank my girlfriend, Tess Feeney, for the idea) Thank you very much! :)
Nice Flash.
Now respond to my review as promised :)
Fische responds:
Thanks! I'm responding! :)
Its alright .
Well , the graphics were pretty good , but you could have put some more attention on the back ground . The music was alright too ....
Instead of just running maybe you could have make the ninja leap over more obstacles or climb .
And finally , the flash was about ninjas , but they werent killing anyone ( Even tough it doesnt matter ) Style 9 .
Fische responds:
I don't really see why ninjas have to be killing people, but when I remake this movie, I'll try to put more obsticles and stuff in. Thanks! :)
Tag
I liked it, that was a nice animation, better than what I have ever done, which is nothing. So Nice one!
Fische responds:
Thank you!