good good
thats not that bad, actually, i liked it.
but here's what you need to do: make the background less monotonous, it gets repeptative...fast, maybe make the sizes more proporsioned, despite how great ninjas are, there arent as tall as buildings. maybe make the running a little less repetative, not a bad idea though, nice to see a ninja having fun
Thank you! This has been the most helpful submission so far. Haha. I realised that the ninjas were as tall as buildings, and I tried to fix it, but I just couldn't make it look right, so I gave up and hoped no one would notice. Suprisingly, no one that I showed it to noticed, but I knew that someone would. When I remake this movie, or fix it up later on, I'll make sure to fix the buildings and the running like you said. The idea of ninjas having a little fun over a game of tag seems to be a pretty popular one though. (You can thank my girlfriend, Tess Feeney, for the idea) Thank you very much! :)
That was good....
I really liked the twist, it just need to be a little more clear, I think. A nice block-letter "TAG!" when contact is made and then it fades away would have been pretty cool. That's just me though.
I thought of doing that, but then someone else told me not to. I think that I'll have to make a general poll and see what the audience thinks is best. Thanks for the review!
great
The only problems I see are that your ninjas dont have any retinas and the side-view stuff looked a little cheaply done. Great otherwise.
I know that the side view stuff looked cheap, but this is all that I could do in the time that I was given. The original ninja did have normal eyes, but I thought that it made him look to personal, and therefore less ninja-like. Thanks for the review though! I plan on remaking this movie someday, so I'll definitly make sure to remove that cheap, side-view effect. : )
lmao
Wow that was great, ur getting a 5. This flash was hilarious, i wish the white ninja would have said something like "Ha Ha Your It!" I loved the way it seemed all serious at first. Great Job Man!
All that I really have to say is thanks!
right..
This movie makes me think you could do better but this was alright. Make another movie im shure you can do better, but funny they were playing tag lol
Yeah, I know that I could do better, but I was limited for time. I think that I might actually remake this movie someday when I have more time. Thanks for the friendly and motivational critism. :)