OMG!!!!! IT'S LOVE AT FIRST LISTEN!!!!!!!
I was enraptured from the start! this is genius. the melody is flawlessly blended with the harmony. and the ritardando at the end and middle was a nice touch as well. annd you did keep the melody simple, though it isn't lacking for it, well done.
... i also don't hear that high pitched ring but...
any way 5/5 10/10