hey this movie should be on front page
i can see you put a lot of work into the making of this flash and i beleive that it deserves front page
Reviews for "Feioras Story Part 2"
merit44 responds:
Thankyou very much for your honesty. I don't think I go as far as to say it should be on front page but I was hoping the effort put into this would show on my part.
wow
that's was alright
merit44 responds:
^^ Glad you liked it!
I'm impressed
^^Good Points^^
I'm very impressed by the graphics in this movie. The anime style of drawings and the amount of detail in this movie shows you have a lot of talent. The voice acting is very good as well, and was high quality stuff. The storyline is unique and seems very interesting, and I will definitely watch upcoming episodes. You obviously spend quite some time making this, and I'm impressed by the results.
^^Needs Improving^^
At some points the graphics just looked odd. Like the little boy's tail or whatever. It's just not consistent with the rest of the movie's graphics.
merit44 responds:
These are the comments that make my time and effort worth while. I plan to make the next one more 2d generated than 3d. I'm just burnt out from other animations I've had to complete recently -_-
good job, quite impressive. really.
*cough cough* yes the animation is quite good, but let's have a look at facts:
Graphics, 6: well done, even dough they weren't exactly the kind i really liked that much, it still pretty well covered the whole thing with it's amaizing details.
Style, 10: good call on the style! THIS is like animations should be made. unlike some original strawberry clock b shit and stuff, less effort - more effor +
Sound, 7: it wasn't half bad, but there was something in it that just...ennoyed me. a lot. i don't remember which part dough.
Violence, 5: i could'nt decide. - there wasn't too much of it, neither was there too little of it. but at least some was to be expected...
Interactivity, 7: technical side was a little crappy, but hey...we all screw up sometime.
Humor, 2: are you kidding me? there was none. but due category blah blah blah, and weird laughter, i put 2. 'nuff said.
Overall, 7: good job!! work like this rare on the flash portal these days. come to think of it, good artists and people who make this stuff are quite rare too...but can't say it was bad though. hey, i may not be be a flash animator myself, (maybe at least not yet, due to missing flash and drawing skills...)but still i just give out reviews. good luck! i'll be expecting more from you, as im keeping my eye on you. (seeing as you'll be one of my favourite authors)
merit44 responds:
Wow! I am pleased that you even think this is remotely good ^^ To be honest I was expecting the worst comming from newgrounds but some of you really do make me want to keep producing *QUALITY* works here. I will take notes on your critisizm and make sure the third one refelects it ^^
Incredible
just a couple of things.
The lip synch was good but could have used some fine tuning
The way you used 3d people and 2d people was kinda strange
Also the backgrounds seemed to continually change style
apart from those minor things it was really good!
merit44 responds:
Arigato Bioice! I need to get a hold of a better mic so I can improve the sound quality. THe next will use more 2d rather than 3d generated to try and look like my characters.