p1?
Not bad... but can I ask where to find part one?
Reviews for "Feioras Story Part 2"
merit44 responds:
Part one is listed as *dfmrpreloader* but just a warning it's very short. This whole thing was just meant to give people better idea of my characters but judging how some seem to be rating this I think I need to consintrate my efforts on the full movie so I don't turn everyone off to it.
Pretty cool concept.
I like what you're trying to do, and the fresh style you're giving us to watch. But your so bad at creating scenes for the audience. I felt like everything wizzed by too fast with no explanation and such.
merit44 responds:
Sorry you felt that way. I felt that certain things should be subliminal and that the audience would think it through and draw there conclusions based upon those conclusions but I guess its better to just spell everything out so we can avoid all this confusion.
This crept from a 5 to a 3 as it went on
I had my sound turned off when I first started watching this and it was better like that. I was thinking five when I saw the first three shots. Unfortunately, when I turned on the sound, I found that the writing was not up to snuff. Far, far from it.
In spite of this, I enjoyed the trippy style. The use of perspective tools on flat objects, however, looked like a time saving tactic disguised as a stylistic choice.
merit44 responds:
Well, for this particular work I will be more than glad to accept a 3 cause I would have given it a 3 myself if I had saw it for the first time. I definetly feel I have and can do better and I will consentrate my efforts on the next one so that you won't feel that I am only given 50% rather than 100%
That was new
That was a new style of flash, didn't seem to have a certain look to. It was a pretty cool movie though. voices didn't seem to fit the characters, but things take practice. Nice job
merit44 responds:
Yeah well there is a reason I do all my own voices. When you get a decent actor which is rare like my man JJ Wilson (I know you guys have to be familar with him since he's done quite a few superb jobs of voice acting for other peoples projects and if you haven't then now you have and should look out for the name cause he's good). Once you get a good actor they usually are flaky and you can't get the work out of them you need other wise they bail on you or give only half ass results and my philosiphy is I can do bad on my own I don't need someone to help to do it. I wish I coul get more dedicated people like JJ to help me out but they are considered the few and I consider myself lucky to be able to work along side with them. I will see what I can do though because it would give me more time to animate rather than have to fill in all the gaps that are open around the dike ^^
would have been better
its a good start for something but i found the voices to be annoying, not because of sound quality, that i have no problem with, its just the voices themselves were a bit dis-satisfying, I'm still workoing on flash so i know just how frustrating it is to get the right voices. The animation was ok, not consistant but suitable. I didnt really like the animalistic features of the characters but its not about what i like, its about how you get your message and story across, the music was well placed by the way, the music matched what was going on well, intead of some rock sound track that was way out of place. btw, make your stage a bit taller, then you can add another layer with a black bar and add subtitles so the voices dont get in the way. good job.
merit44 responds:
I hate to feel I let people down especially when I"m trying to give them something to make them say wow, and I will do the best I can to try to make sure this will not be an issue in the future (All though you really can't do anything about the @$$ holes of newgrounds and in general)so with them aside don't let this turn you away from future works of mine. I will try to improve where I can and turn out something all of us on newgrounds can be proud of.