Nice warm up
I know some of the styles you were trying ot go with, such as the focusing on the mouht of hte speaker every so often, and i appreciate the feel you were trying to convey. I thought the mood was suitably creepy, and reminded me of a steven king novel for some reason. All in all tho, i think that your next atempt will be better. Can't wait to see it. This was a good warm up.
Full of effort but a bit short
Your graphics were decent, nothing spectacular but certainly not bad.
Your voice overs were once again in the same category. I personally would've liked better acting from the blue guy while still keeping the voice. It's good but it could be great. It's a great character.
Story was a bit cliché and predictable so it didn't perk me too much.
My main concerns were your animating. You were trying to do some very difficult things there especially with the 3D, which requires a lot of skill and knowledge to do so good effort nonetheless. However your perspectives were off and things did not flow smoothly. You need to make perspective points to endure that things can pull of that effect. I'm also assuming you did this with a mouse. While great work for a mouse, a pen tablet or vector lines will do you much better, vector lines and fills will be your friend if you have no tablet.
good job, but take more time. This piece had a lot of potential as well as flaws.
Interresting
Nice, it kept me entertained, especially the blue folk there, he spoke in a very swell way.
Anyway, don't over-animate, fbf-ing over 25 frames per second is just wrong, it looks more fluid but common eye can't appreciate it, especially newgrounders... so don't tire yourself... even disney animates max at 24 fps so.... just tween the stuff over 25 but skip frames when fbf-ing
Most fluid 3d effects Ive seen!
while your perspective was a tad off, the shifting of said perspective was FLAWLESS.
With out flaws.
AT ALL.
Also, the animation was natural looking and PERFECTLY FLUID. WOW. It was almost like I was watching this happen in real life except the characters were cartoons.
10 and 5. Please, grace the portal with more of your fine work!
very good
i loved the style, especialy with the goo dripping off the walls. It made me feel, kind of......... um.............. creeped out. ya thats it, creeped out. keep up the good work. And be sure to take your time on the next one so it isn't sloppy. Rock on dude!