Love the dialog
Excellent. I really enjoyed it. It had so much flavour. My favourite part was how Sludgemare's words didn't mean what he was saying. Like he didn't want to speak the truth. "I Pledge you not to open that door..." as opposed to '...beg you not to...' A very intrigueing character.
I didn't care for the art style but it got the job done and I want to see more.