Reviews for two brothers

[Redman85]

Story feels incomplete

It felt like that given the way you presented the fight that it should of have a little more context. Obviously the victor was the more vicious brother but it needs more help than just a graphical representation (good Vs. evil) or a least using the music to set the tone for the victory. This feels almost incomplete like you rushed it at the end just to have it finished. Its like evil won just for evil's sake, but I agree with the last a guy the prequel would probably end up better than this entry.

evolart responds:

You are right.. IT was rushed at the end. Thanx for the review

[John-Woo-Ping]

Nice!

"Well one of the guys died so I cant make a sequal on both of them now. But thanX for your review"

is what you said to one reviwer....I think different. First you named it 2 Brothers...if they're siblings why do they fight eachother? I know to be king, but is greed the only thing that's driving them? What I'm gettin at is there is so much to be expanded on in this short clip. You could definately make a series out of this on explaining these characters stories alone. So a prequel if you will.

I liked the music you chose it made it dramatic and the narrative was good, but could be deeper. Great style of animation too..although if this was practice I imagine what could be if you're really determined. Anyways nice job!

evolart responds:

Thank you. A prequal sounds cool. ThanX for the advise. Also i re edited it to have like a cruble paper feel to it. So check it out.

[DumbassDude]

Pretty nice

this is the kind of thing u should base u style of flash on to, everyone has thier own style, it what makes a flash artist gd and unique.
Kepp up the gd work m8

[WAAANIMATION]

oh that's cool

That was so cool. I loved the animation style how it was all shaky and the story was good. Mabye you could make a series on this. keep it up. : )

evolart responds:

Well one of the guys died so I cant make a sequal on both of them now. But thanX for your review

[MC-Hippy]

fuckin weird man...

Strange but really good, FbF bold move but turned out really well. keep it up but i do think you should change 1 thing, the fact that it has the "silent movie effect" is alright but i personally dont like it, there should have been a bit more action, but as u said, its for practice so you deserved #1 of the day...

MC_Hippy AKA RobVayne

evolart responds:

Thanks alot. Yeah I know. Im not big on sound effects and never really done any of them. I should get started. The prob was it was only a one day work effort. And drawing FbF is tiring and takes time so I did what i could in under a day. Thanks for the review