Well
Just saying i didn't like the flash it was.......horrible. Should make another one with better graphics and some interactivity.
But you are now The Turd of the Week
Reviews for "The Fire Orb part1"
you got talent
you have alot of talent, you can make flash well, but, dont make trailers of movies. its ok making a second part, but it eun for abou ta miniut and a half and could not have taken much work. i suggest take more time, get sum voices in, and NO TRAILERS!
Not as bad as people say
I didn't think it was so bad, the main problems were the mixing of sprites and non-sprite drawings no talking and bad choice of music
So I think you should draw your own scenery, get some voice acters or at least chose an easer font to read and think about the music before you put it in.
You seem to have real talent so I think you could do much better
P.S. The plot is easy to understand those others are just being dicks
What?
The world map wasn't well done, it was lifted from Chrono Trigger. You can't just steal the world map from Chrono Trigger. The plot was confusingly disconnected and made no sense, but there is potential here. Unify your artistic style, either sprites or hand-drawings (it looks like you can draw well enough for the latter) and develop the story a lot more. Make something the viewer will actually take an interest in. Instead of making part two, I'd suggest rewriting and submitting this part. Good luck.
No TOTW
Man, its actually not that terrible. I think it could use a better story and you shouldnt really mix sprites with hand drawings, I think it looks bad. All things considered though, I honestly think it should have even got into ng, a lot worse has got in. THIS SHOULD NOT BE TOTW.