It wasn't horrible, but Newgrounds has seen better
To start off, the background was, for the most part, beatiful. It all fell apart when it came to character design. The two just didn't mix well. The sound was what made your flash bearible. it went together well with what was happening. The text went by a little too fast for me to catch all that was happening. I winded up watching it three times before I was able to read it all. Overall it was okay. I hope to watch more of your work soon!