What is NG coming to?
What is NG coming to? I mean seriously, I bet a flash with the plot of some poorly drawn, near stick-figure crashing a car into a hospital then randomly and wantonly killing the sick and the nurses would get over a three. I mean heck, I bet you wouldn't even need color. The great thing about it is, you MIGHT even be able to pass it off as some sort of sick and twisted comical tribute by tossing some slapstick music in the background.
But it's not like this would actually happen. It's not as if there is some flash artist who is sick, deranged, or just flat out morbid enough to... Oh... Wait...
Look dude, your technical aspects, though simple, were crisp and clear enough, it just so happens that your content consisted of nothing but pointless, meaningless, violence. No art, no story, no poetry, little creativity... Just... Violence... You therefore leave me no choice then but to judge your work on that basis... Which I have.
P.S. You obviously have skill, just, see if you can deliver something more artful.