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Reviews for "boat crash"

well, you needn't...

I am not going to be like one of my teachers and give you a low score because I think you need something to work for. I vote to protect this one!

It was very brief but was well done. The graphics are extremely well done, especially the backgrounds. The detail on the man's face, the direction of his eyes etc. all really good.

The animation was a little jumpy. You may need to plot the motions out a little better, stabilize the tripod. Excellent job on catching the little motions and the difficult problems of sinking through the water with the flating hair etc. Really well thought out!

The sound was really great. Not perfect, but more than adequate. The storyboarding was great. The animation flowed naturally.

The story was simple and short. More would be better. A mermaid comes to the rescue? He washes up on a beach? What's next?!?! That needs a bit of work.

Wow! It wass really great. One of the best claymations I have seen here on NG from a technical standpoint. A little more attention to detail on motion etc. and we a re talking Wallace and Grommitt quality. Many people may not appreciate this production, because the excellence is in the details.

flug responds:

thank you. and thanks for all the sugestions.juste because of you I will probaly make it longer. but i'm not shure ...so in overal just thanks.

i guess...

If this was a little longer it mite hve gotten a better grade.

Different

Well , we don't have alot of Stop motion movies around here so that was actually really interesting to see ... however , you need to have a preloader for your movie ( get the Ng one) and you need to better optimize your sound ( The filesize is too big considering the lenght of this movie )

To learn all that ... Click on "Learn Flash " right under the "Submit" button that you've clicked to submit this ...

flug responds:

thank's for the sugestions

Good till end...

Dude I think you should have just left out the disclaimer at the end about being short it took my attention away from your video.

you already know its too short

so yeah, i wont complain about the length. one thing i will complain about is the red line - wtf was that about?
animation had its good + bad points... the models were good + i loved the expression on the guys face when the wave was coming down, but on the other hand the animation was really jerky and the background sucked.
good work though, i can see you put some effort into this :)

flug responds:

the red line is because I use a free trial to made the first part