you already know its too short
so yeah, i wont complain about the length. one thing i will complain about is the red line - wtf was that about?
animation had its good + bad points... the models were good + i loved the expression on the guys face when the wave was coming down, but on the other hand the animation was really jerky and the background sucked.
good work though, i can see you put some effort into this :)
the red line is because I use a free trial to made the first part
i guess...
If this was a little longer it mite hve gotten a better grade.
well, you needn't...
I am not going to be like one of my teachers and give you a low score because I think you need something to work for. I vote to protect this one!
It was very brief but was well done. The graphics are extremely well done, especially the backgrounds. The detail on the man's face, the direction of his eyes etc. all really good.
The animation was a little jumpy. You may need to plot the motions out a little better, stabilize the tripod. Excellent job on catching the little motions and the difficult problems of sinking through the water with the flating hair etc. Really well thought out!
The sound was really great. Not perfect, but more than adequate. The storyboarding was great. The animation flowed naturally.
The story was simple and short. More would be better. A mermaid comes to the rescue? He washes up on a beach? What's next?!?! That needs a bit of work.
Wow! It wass really great. One of the best claymations I have seen here on NG from a technical standpoint. A little more attention to detail on motion etc. and we a re talking Wallace and Grommitt quality. Many people may not appreciate this production, because the excellence is in the details.
thank you. and thanks for all the sugestions.juste because of you I will probaly make it longer. but i'm not shure ...so in overal just thanks.
its great!
Just add a preloader next time so it can preload all the movie so it dont stop like in the middle to catch up.
well then if you dont have a preloader then make one or go to my site and download the FC preloader
-Justin :)
Keep up the great work your a really good stop motion animator and if you keep it up like this you'll be getting front page!
when I was reading your review, that make me smile and just thank you.
Keep up the good work.
It was kinda short. A+ on the graphics though.