Reviews for Dead Part 1

[Hitori-Toma]

A promising start to a flash horror series.

I really enjoyed that short animation. I understand that it's only the beginning of more episodes, and I'll keep that into mind while reviewing.

The look and feel of your drawings are pretty good. Although they could be worked on, I liked it.

The tweens seem monotonous and don't have the right human motion.

There seems to be a lack of audio. Maybe some low-key BG Music and moans from the zombies would do the trick.

The psuedo-camera angles are great. A bit of polishing that skill and it would be perfect.

Good movie. Hope to see more.

JimmySavage responds:

I know what you mean. I never liked tweens in the first place. I'll have a lot more frame by frame in future shorts and tweens won't be as stiff. Thanks for the input!

[The-knight]

Nice drawings..

I really enjoyed watching this submission - great artwork, smooth animation and the correct choice of sounds kinda elevated this to a higher standard.

The fact that i got a psychosomatic reaction (i got the goosebumbs when he chrashed the zombies face:D) really made me realize how well this flash is done..

Great work!

[Ion14]

Very cool.

I've only just gotten into zombie movies. They always gave me the creeps. But this one had a decent rating. I checked it out and it seemed great. I would like to see more to this. And I saw a review that said this seemed to need a prelude. That would explain a large amount of the story. Good job.

[Deathjester-90]

Good

It's Pretty Good, i like the plot so far....try using more time on the colors and background... i look forward of seeing more sequels on this part if you improve it some

[RyanAn]

Zombies rock!

I really liked your intro to the movie - the logo and easy cutting right into the movie just looked great. I am a huge zombie fan and having this new take on the liviing dead is quite neat to see. The animation style is unique in that it's a simple concepted art style - with the characters blend in with the surroundings. I would of liked to have seen some more actions from the characters, but it is a good start. The sound effects that were in the movie were good, but there were some instances were I felt some more could of been put in for some more added effect. Maybe a slight backdrop of some music oculd of been added starting from when the man woke up at the beginning to add some instensity or intrigue. A good start! I will be looking forward to more from you soon. 8.5/10

Ryan