Sweet song but..
I loved the music but that alone unfortunetly can't carry an animation through. This lacks consistency in the nature of its design. You seem to jerk back and forth between color and black n white trying to give it a mangaish feel but at the same time bring it to life with some color. I suggest you either leave it black and white or just take the time to color the whole thing. The animation was much better than the first one so on to the third for me.