Well...
It was ok man. The character animation was great but the backgrounds needed a little work. Also even though that was a cool montage, it would have been alot better to have an actual plot with dialoge. If you are going to take this in that direction though i think with a great plot and good voice actors this could be great. Oh and this is just me but never re-use animations like when the guy was holding his hand up to the sky. BUT, it was decent man just add substance and your there.
Oooooh.
Good point.
good
Well I watched both of these and to tell you the truth, I didn't really like the songs in either...not a techno fan. I liked the art and the animation was decent as well. But another thing is that I don't understand any of it lol...maybe it's just me...
Meh.
Good
I thought your first was better though.
Could have been more.
I was honestly expecting more. Just... more. More content. More color. Each scene left me feeling a little empty and most took a little too long to switch to the next. A lot of the backgrounds could have been more complete. More detail could easily make this into a top flash.
You could do better.
I'll work on it.
Keep working on it.
Decent animation, though quite basic. No real storyline. Nothing really origonal, although it's very hard to find ANYTHING that is actually origonal.. The music didn't go along well with this animation though.. You should of spent more time picking out the music, then just putting on some music you liked. Overall it's decent. Work at it, and I'm sure you'll be a great flash artist someday..
Bah.
Hey, but I appreciate the constructive criticism.