Reviews for Sprawl Metropolis (Old)

[KillerDreaming]

Here.

The play button only makes it restart, so why did you submit this?

[FoxFired]

Quite lame

The dialogue, in particular, was horrible.

"I've got me a demon to slay!"
"I'm just a lonely traveler!"

I've heard better writing from anime hacks, or Helen Keller.

Next time read some short stories or something.