Great Work!
You have placed some nice effort here, and the only complaint I have was there were a couple of "holes" to where I was like.. "Wait, how did it get to that scene?" None the less, that is a minor thing to a major piece that you have done here. I see some greatness in this coming series, and keep this going and you will be getting more "4's or 5's" out of me! This one here.. gets my 5! Congrats beforehand when you make the illustrious top 50 with your series!