Pretty good
My only problem with this was your choice of music. You were right for picking a song in the Happy Hardcore genre, but "99 Red Baloons Remix" seemed out of place, because the animation had nothing to do with the lyrics.
Reviews for "Fun in the Snow!"
JoelSem responds:
I just needed a happy hardcore song, and it was already on my computer, so I used it : )
Thanks for the review.
wtf
what the f*ck was that about any way try to make sence next time i like the graphics
JoelSem responds:
You're clearly a moron : )
It's called random humor.
Ahahah, nice one :D
Well, this flash was sort of borderline for me (untill the ending)... and I think that to improve the initial attention-grabbing factor of the movie, you could've spent a bit more time making the graphics look better - more artwork, smoother drawings, etc.
I liked the song you used, because A: It's a favourite of mine (by Goldfinger) and B: the really happy mood of the song went well with the facial expression of the guy running through the snow. I thought that it was all 'la-dee-da' right up untill he fell, which made me chuckle.
You build up to the ending well - because you didn't make him fall too quicky and abruptly end the movie, and you didn't drag it out for too long making it boring and rendering the ending un-funny.
Considering this was only your second flash, with limited flash experience, you've done well. Keep practicing, and shoot me an email when you next send something into the portal!
JoelSem responds:
I would email you if I managed to get your email, lol.
Mines Joelsem@hotmail.com, add me to your MSN if you have one.
Thanks for all of the feedback!
And the quick, random stuff is what You should be looking forward to in my future flashes.
Thanks for the review : )
It was almost good...
It was funny, but it was too long in places and too short in others ...like the story.
JoelSem responds:
Heh, It was rushed. Only about.. 3 hours of work in that one.
Thanks for the review.