Reviews for Fun in the Snow!

[Esach]

ROFL

at first i was just sitting there... omg this is gona get blammed, but then i thought, hmm nice start up. Then the music was kind of annoying becuase i thought that you were going to totally make it crappy. it was kind of slow but when he started running... BOOM! tripped, i laughed my ass off! i rarely get that kind of laugh, very nice, i voted 5 becuase of the perfect timing of that fall. i was laughing like, omg is he gona get up!? very nice. Now on how to improve.

Smoother Animation: When he turned you could have added 1-3 more parts so it looked like he actually turned around. The running was pretty good, the character design could have EASILY been better, so next time work for about a day looking for designs and thinking about it. Decide what would be best that you could still animate well.

Music was kind of quiet, i could hear it but it sounded like a bad microphone recording. could have been a bit longer also, maybe added 2 more ways that would make us laugh.

JoelSem responds:

Thanks for the tips!
Lol, I made it look all shitty at the beggening, it makes the end that much better.
The graphics.. Well, I worked on this for two hours. It was kinda a rush project, I just wanted it done.
I've had a total of maybe.. 22 hours of flash experiance, so I still need to expand my abilities on flash too.

About the turning thing, that was an experiment, and I'm happy that you commented on it.

I had to reduce the sound file quality, it went from 256kbps down to 32kbps, so alot of data was lost. It reduced the file size from 2,000 kb down to 200.

Thanks for the review, and your welcome for the laugh.

[DevilsSin666X]

nice

that was so cool, i never saw that ending coming, lol. that was some great work. i'm sill laughing. that's that kind of thing that gets funnier everytime you see it.

JoelSem responds:

I still laugh when I see it!
Thanks for the review : )

[MiddleFingerRings]

hehehehehehehehehehehehehe

hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe cool.

JoelSem responds:

Very intellectual review : P
Lol, thanks for the positive feedback.

[Rocky]

Hehe that song...

I did find this a decent flash, but for 2 reasons
1. The ending was totally unexpected hence funny! (I also liked how when he falls hes at the edge of the screen, I can't explain why but that contributes to the humor)

2. That song, its sooo damn cheesy! My girlfriend is part German and she loves the original version of that song (I had to sit through it at her house, and basically kill myself laughing at her spaz dancing to the song)

You have potential, so keep it up and make some more flash!

JoelSem responds:

Expect to see alot of random humor in my future flashes. I really like making these, and getting reviews of all types.
Thanks for the review, and your welcome for the laugh.

[cyberpants]

Pretty good

My only problem with this was your choice of music. You were right for picking a song in the Happy Hardcore genre, but "99 Red Baloons Remix" seemed out of place, because the animation had nothing to do with the lyrics.

JoelSem responds:

I just needed a happy hardcore song, and it was already on my computer, so I used it : )
Thanks for the review.