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I was hoping you we're going to conclude this like an intellectual. But you didnt. You could have touched on the juxtaposition of protecting positive intentions with violence, or the relationship between actions and said intentions in generall, but instead it just fell. You should rework this ending and submit it later.
Congratz.
Congratulations man. Nice first 'real' piece. I liked it.
Very good!
Even though this had no real violence or story, I thought it was something good for a change... You know, something with a moral stand in. Very well done!
Indeed my friend. Explosions do not make a movie good, lol.
O.......M........G......
That burned my eyes out. I'm sorry but that was cheap animation. try drawing your characters with more detail and more shading....
it was that bad
Did you even read the story?
I liked it
Graphics were decent, and animation, although a little less decent, was satisfactory. I liked the story...very touching and sad...overall this flash was quite nice. My only advice on how to make this and future works better is to continue to work on animation...don't rely primarily on tweens for character movement, lol. But it was good and I gave it a 4/5. ^_^